~critique and solid~

Come again to my position paper. It is a hard work for me because I have spent many times on it. This time I need to find some supporting points for my thesis statement. Luckily it is not as hard as thesis statement. I just need to find points and evidences to support what I have said earlier. Thank god, mine have been approve the second time I showed to my tutor. She has helped me a lot and she really shows me the right path. For me, these supporting points are just like my own decision in taking the right path. It makes me choose the best among them so in the end I have no regret in life. Luckily when I showed my supporting points to my tutor, she accepted them and it is a relief for me. Now, I need to continue on my evidences and hoe I wanted to make it into an essay with sentences that make readers accept it with no doubt. In addition, I also have to be careful with what I want to say because sometimes what we say can affect others, especially in literature context. As a whole, this assignment really help me a lots in my study and in my way of criticize something.

~MaHaBrAtA~

MAHABRATA is one of the epic stories that I learned in class. This short story is interesting because it tells me about other culture and belief. Even I do not have the prior knowledge about it, I seek for information from my friends who are Indians and they explain to me what it is all about. I understand the story line, but I need more information about the characters in the story. By reading this short story, I know what other culture belief and thought and as a member of a society I should respect it. It also helps me to gain knowledge so that when I go to ceremony of this society, I know what it is and I know how to respect it. Reading story can give us lots of information about real life situations. We not only gain interests, but we also gain some knowledge of something and as a result we can adapt it in our real life. As a conclusion, read more and gain more…

~thesis~

I have already started to think of my thesis statement for my position paper. It looked easy but actually it was a tough one. I have to re-do my thesis statement a few times because they were not in the level of university students. However, after a hard work of thinking and revising with my friends, I manage to get it done and it is really a relief for me. For me, this is a real challenge as a university students and this help me to prepare if I wanted to further my study because it will be going a hard work. This thesis statement thing teaches me to become more realistic and rational in doing something. In addition, it teaches me not to look back and admit my fault even if I think it is right. I have to consider other thought of something and with that I can improve myself. It just a real life situation where we need to consider many things before we do something in life. As a whole, this position paper makes me a better student as I think critically from time to time until it done.