Thursday, February 15, 2007

~critique and solid~

Come again to my position paper. It is a hard work for me because I have spent many times on it. This time I need to find some supporting points for my thesis statement. Luckily it is not as hard as thesis statement. I just need to find points and evidences to support what I have said earlier. Thank god, mine have been approve the second time I showed to my tutor. She has helped me a lot and she really shows me the right path. For me, these supporting points are just like my own decision in taking the right path. It makes me choose the best among them so in the end I have no regret in life. Luckily when I showed my supporting points to my tutor, she accepted them and it is a relief for me. Now, I need to continue on my evidences and hoe I wanted to make it into an essay with sentences that make readers accept it with no doubt. In addition, I also have to be careful with what I want to say because sometimes what we say can affect others, especially in literature context. As a whole, this assignment really help me a lots in my study and in my way of criticize something.

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